Hopeless

by damaged rose   Oct 29, 2006


Tears that I cried,
Hopes that I dreamed,
Secret confession I had tried,
but everything is just same.

.x.farhaghouse.x.

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  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Short but to the point.

  • 18 years ago

    by damaged rose

    Thanks, i've fix it already =)

  • 18 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Its short and sweet. The Flow is interupted with the word "just" in the last line. Fix it and it'd be better. 4/5

    [PygmyPuff]

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