Comments : Hopeless

  • 18 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Its short and sweet. The Flow is interupted with the word "just" in the last line. Fix it and it'd be better. 4/5

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 18 years ago

    by damaged rose

    Thanks, i've fix it already =)

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Short but to the point.