by kyle orr Oct 29, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
You yell and tell me to leave you alone, |
by *Charisma*
You have some very interesting pieces. I have one word of advice. Break your lines into shorter stanzas like this. |
by superman15
Very well expressed. |
Aww this is a very well written poem, and i could feel your pain and fear for letting this person go, you captured the feelings very well. deffinatly a 5/5... |