Aww this is a very well written poem, and i could feel your pain and fear for letting this person go, you captured the feelings very well. deffinatly a 5/5...
if you have the time, please could you read and comment on my poems, thanks. Kirsty xx

Very well expressed.

You have some very interesting pieces. I have one word of advice. Break your lines into shorter stanzas like this.

You yell and tell me to leave you alone,
then you say you don't want me near,
but some day your gonna go away
and that's my biggest fear.

hope that helps....keep writing! Thanks for ur comments! Jpoet*