Once again you've used great wording. Have you ever tried to write a poem that isn't so dark and abstract? The first stanza was my favorite line by the way.

Brad

P.S. I'll be back...hopefully, lol.

Some poems need long comments ,and once and a while one encounters a poem that simply is to good and words of appreciation can't tell why it is so good
this one is such a poem
I simply like it .....alot
so , congratulations
fine, fine very fine piece of poetry
keep this up :)

I am not one for Dark poems, but you wrote this good. The words used and the way you used them was great. Good Job.

Peace, Joe