Aww a very sweet christmas poem, I really wasn't expecting the sad twist at the end though :[ very nicely written well done xx 5/5

I really like this poem cos if you ignore the last stanza its a beautiful christmas poem and it gets me all christmassy and lyk I can't wait for it to be here. However I do like the fact that it makes you feel like that because it makes the twist more of a shock because it's so unexpected. Maybe you could write a happy christmas poem too cos I think you'd be good at that!!!!!
Neway, I rly lyk dis 1 cos it rly captures the Christmas spirit (although I hate that expression it fits here!)

All my Love,
Beth xxxxxxxx

This is the 1st Christmas poem I read and a uniquely written one at that.