by Lady Nik Oct 29, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I cut away the pain tossed around. I am no longer looking down. You were a image I thought up. I look around and see I'm stuck. I scream as the rain warns me. I hear it whisper, runaway so they can't see. |
by sweetiepie18
Wow!! |
by Lenny
What gorgeous imagery! Beautiful flow- so original. That is wonderful...dont know if dark is the right category though and perhaps a line break before the repitition of Dream after each stanza for effect. |