When I looked at the rating I could hardly believe it: a 2.5? Hell, you deserve MUCH better than THAT! 5/5 from me for a superb job at describing everything. I've said it once, I'll say it again: You have an amazing talent.

But now each drop is different,
as it falls like a dagger from the sky,
piercing my tender skin below,
drowning out my mournful cries.

I love the simile in the stanza. I just... well I envy you, girl! You're so freaking good! *cries*
[*:.heart.broken.:~] xoxo

This poem needs a much higher rating! It was truly amazing! I love analogies with the rain..and this was truly beautiful! 5/5 Jpoet*

"But now each drop is different,
as it falls like a dagger from the sky,
piercing my tender skin below,
drowning out my mournful cries."

very nicely written. thank you soo much for all your comments, they put a smile on my face. thank you :) keep up the great work!
-xXx-

The imagery in this poem was amazing, the flow was great and the rhyming didn't seem forced. Well done!!
5/5

Other than a reminder to make sure to always look over your poem a second time and correct any mistakes, excellent job. I love the rain and enjoyed the way you portrayed it! 5/5

~jas~

Wow.. i really enjoyed reading this poem.. again your have spectacular word choice and the flow and rhyme are wonderful... im SO adding you to my favorites