Well, it was a well-written poem. Very good imagery, but I hope you don't plan on hurting anyone emotionally or phsyically because it only feels good temporarily but the guilt and consequences last a lifetime. Jpoet*

Man, that was one AMAZING poem! The emotion that it showed was so true and heartfelt... It was one of the best I've ever read.

So tomorrow I'll take all your shining stars,
and pull them from the sky,
let the demons run loose inside your head,
and pretend I don't see you cry.

That's my favourite verse. I know it sorta makes sense, because it's the last one, but I truly think it puts a shocking finish to the story told through the poetry. Love it! And keep it up!
[*:.heart.broken.:~] xoxo

I liked this one alot. It's very powerful and well written. 5/5

marcella

I really like this poem. its amazing. but i got a little confused with the fourth and fith stanza's, cause why would you wanna follow someones rule book to a "t" so you knew where you stood to them. and then let demons go inside there mind.

maybe im jsut totally not getting the point.

but still good job.

Wow.. i really love your poems.. this one is just as wonderful as the rest.. maybe your best.. what a STRONG ending.. great job!