Great title.I like the contrast of love and hate.I can very much relate and understand.I like the hope and despair, the love and loss. This is perfectly expressed. |
by Espoirfailed
A poem that is really effective because of the opposite it utilises. i really enjoyed reading it because it was original and completely different to anything i've ever read before. |
by KT Mackey
I really liked it, but the rythm is a bit off on some parts. I think you could make it really really good if you worked with it a little. keep up the good work. -kt |
by isabel
Astonishing write :) |
The poem is actually my -now jk'd- predictions for how Harry/Draco's relationship might've evolved in Deathly Hallows. |