This one is mmazing...i like the thought u put into it!

Omg that was amazing

You are awesome...I am going to read all of them...5/5

This is a great poem, well written, thank u for the comment on my own, crumble down

Wow thats amazing I would never be able to put some of those words to use like that! youve got some real tallent. Way to go!!!

Very discriptive! Great job! :-)

Great, just great, thx for comment but that was the best poem i have ever read.

Nice poem i lke the darkness to it i love it

I love it! It is very discriptive:)

This one was amazing! the emotion was there and could be felt.
+keep up the work+
p.s. and thanks for the comment and for looking at some of my stuff.

Cool poem! I liked these verses best
"My own morbid hate
In a crimson pool"
very dark. Good job!
Thanks for the comment :)

LOVE IT.

Good. 5/5.

The emotion in this poem is heartbreakiing.
I feel the exact way.
the self hate, the madness.
I also love the personification.
5/5
and thanks for the comment :)

"The final of all wine
Broken on the floor
The liquid of life
I once more, implore"

i really like that last bit.
it flows perfectly, and the rhythm of it seems perfect, like if spoken it could be put to a beat and sound just as good.

you have a great style, keep up the great work.

Wow. just wow. that was an amazing piece with great flow and an awesome format. i love your use of words. it makes the poem raw and powerful. 100/5 if thats possible. keep it up. ~KM~

"To late for redemption"
To = Too

First three lines should be there own stanza, in my opinion. They have this flawlessness about them. While as the rest, though still flawless, has a bit different flow/emotion to it. Not as catchy and moving, rather suttle and simple. Which is a good thing. I think if the entire poem were like the first three lines it would be too much. But it's not

Good poem, dear.

Wow, amazing write. keep it up

Creatve wise, were the same, agian i have written a whole bunch like this, and you shoul be proud, very good poem. kinda choppy flow though