I'm giving this poem a 3/5. It was okay, but it wasn't exactly very smooth, but it did make sense, and the topic was good... I liked the similarity of the first and last stanzas....
Okay, and the real reason I'm ‘commenting’:
Sense the first post of that topic was deleted I can't exactly remember and understand the entire thread. It was a while ago, and my life has been going fast enough that I haven't remembered everything.
I think my first paragraph in response was telling you to accept that they were probably going to be together for a while, and to relax about it. Just because your friend hangs out with some, or makes out with, or hangs on, some one doesn’t mean you have to be there, dealing with it directly. You can be around your friend while she’s just by herself, and get along then, and when they are together, you can go find some thing else to do, so you aren’t thinking about how annoying and horrible they’re being.