This would sound awesum as a song
its got great lyrics...
u truly have a talent :)

Hey thanks for commenting on my poem...

um coolie song... n yeah a smile can hide everything!!!!!! wen we low we can face our mates with a smile an you wont know somethting is wrong...

really good song! take care

A very good song! and true also. a smile can hide many things. it really can. you chose your words very wisely and it came out great. a song/poem from the heart, is always good to read. hopefully your song becomes something one day! job well done and best of luck. 5/5.

-Ashlei.