Are you happy now?

"Your negative comments are so hard to ignore"

I've always been the kind of person who dwells on the negative and on what people say that could be negative... Heh. Nicely done.

This poem for you may have a different meaning to what its meaning is for me,
mhmm reminds me of my fake friends,
arr anyways nice work
xx

I feel this way about a lot of people at my school anymore. I love how much feeling you brought out of it. Keep up the work. You have a bright fututre ahead of you.

I like your poem, but I'm not sure about the repetition. Maybe you should just use "Are you happy now?" in the begginning and ending of your poem. I think it would give the line more strength.

Good job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby