I like your poem, but I'm not sure about the repetition. Maybe you should just use "Are you happy now?" in the begginning and ending of your poem. I think it would give the line more strength. |
by Trish
I feel this way about a lot of people at my school anymore. I love how much feeling you brought out of it. Keep up the work. You have a bright fututre ahead of you. |
by Alicia Jane
This poem for you may have a different meaning to what its meaning is for me, |
"Your negative comments are so hard to ignore" |