Mmm! I love that poem, what a refreshing style! I love the structure, or lack-there-of, a truly inspiring piece. I agree with (and enjoyed the explanation at the end, though it wasnt neccessary- a great idea) you when you point out that its funny what the mind can derive from things, I look at some of my poems and they start about one thing e.g. death and end up with a spades love affair... I think my head is broken, and I think yours is wonderfully intact. Great poem! *stops saying un-comment like things*

This is kinda of wicked yet cruel all this in ur head. ha a pretty face can deceit... there goes to show u what comes up out of nowhere in life ...but this poem is unique... well done