Comments : Lean on me no more

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Aw that was sad, it was a great poem however!
    =-)
    Nice job!

    (Check out mine if you want, i like to know what people think)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jax x lyn

    Awww that's such a sad poem! *wipes away tear* but the worst part is that I can majorly relate to it. I lost the best friend I'd ever had last year... It sucked majorly. I missed her with all my heart, and I had many sleepless nights where all I would do was cry myself to sleep. I thought that life couldn't get any worse; the police were involved, her mother despised my guts, I was closing in on a harsh suspention, and my grades sank to th ebottm of the ocean. I wasn't one to cry easily, but the rejection and shun I faced each day was more than enough to do the trick. Not to depress anyone though! The story eds semi-happily; we're friends once again, even though our parents don't know it!

    That's beside the point however. Excellent write, and Iwish to see more of your talent in th near future.
    [*:.heart.broken.:~] xoxo