Aww cute and sweet poem. i loved the way you wrote it.. very heartfelt and touching. the only thing i would say is in the first stanza you wrote 'summer without rain' ?? should it be 'winter without rain' OR 'summer without sun' ?? just some helpful hints :)
other than that BRAVO LOL 5/5
Please could you read and comment on my poems, i'd like to know what you think, and how i can improve. thanks xx