Another Hole

by Katie Bug :)   Oct 30, 2006


Staring out the window
not knowing where to go
life is moving too fast
while the pain and misery insist to last

World consistantly changing
while her life is rearranging
things get complicated
and she's getting quite frustrated

No one around to hold
when she's feeling alone and cold
emptiness and depression
a life with no succession

Blackness and uncertainty
"Why is all this done to me?"
a great girl with good grades
Oh, the unfortunate decisions made

A path leading to a dead end
too many broken hearts to mend
a young life, stopped too early
her family need, no longer worry

No more depression or stress
her body finally now at rest
teenage drama claims another soul
And in society, yet another hole.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    The depth of emotion expressed is so touching. I really like the nice flow of words.. great poem! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Yet another great poem. I loved it. The flow and the rhymes where amazing. Good Job!

    Ciao, Joe

  • 18 years ago

    by Purple

    Great poem, although I had to pause for the last line of the first stanza and re-read it, and the word succession's meaning didn't seem to fit.... Succession is like some on taking over some one else job when they leave. On second thought, it could work, it's creative, but it can work.

    Good flow, rhym, rhythem, blah blah blah, other things on that check list....

    And of coarse the subject of the poem is self was emotoin driven, emotoin causing, connectable, and real.

    You did a great job.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by shay

    It has lots of feeling and i think thats what makes this poem great, a lot of effort went into this poem.*shay*

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Wow. That is one of the best poems I've read. I love it.
    ~Katie~

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