Oh my god... I was feeling like this today...:( But I wasn't about to kill my self lol. But wow I felt that. very GOOD job, I really liked it.. read my poem so you know what I'm talking about.

Omg i love this one you are really good keep it up ~Charlla May~

Daaaaang! I love it! Wow. You are a great writer! Please, keep up the work and keep me posted! :D

~~Spanish367

Wow. That is one of the best poems I've read. I love it.
~Katie~

It has lots of feeling and i think thats what makes this poem great, a lot of effort went into this poem.*shay*

Great poem, although I had to pause for the last line of the first stanza and re-read it, and the word succession's meaning didn't seem to fit.... Succession is like some on taking over some one else job when they leave. On second thought, it could work, it's creative, but it can work.

Good flow, rhym, rhythem, blah blah blah, other things on that check list....

And of coarse the subject of the poem is self was emotoin driven, emotoin causing, connectable, and real.

You did a great job.

5/5

Yet another great poem. I loved it. The flow and the rhymes where amazing. Good Job!

Ciao, Joe

The depth of emotion expressed is so touching. I really like the nice flow of words.. great poem! :)