Comments : The Grieving Heart

  • 18 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Another beautiful piece. This one has some pain/sadness in it though. Wonderful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    The last stanza summed it up nicely. And in the first stanza is it supposed to be Reminds (plural)? Just an editing suggestion. Good job...beautiful poem!
    Charisma*
    #3 comment