Liz, My Love

by Italian Stallion   Oct 30, 2006


During the day
Or during the night
No matter what
You're always right

Hold my hand
Cuddle close
Let our feelings expand
And our hearts aglow

Tell me you love me
Show me you care
I won't disagree
For we are a great pair

I love you with all my heart
And would like to ask you this
Liz, my love, Will you marry me?

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    Awwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
    i friggin love that. that was wicked. omg. liz is one lucky gurl

  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Aww, so sweet.

    I agree with what Miss.Huggable said, about one line not rhyming and advising you to add on an extra line on the last stanza.

    It was very good, though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, that was so sweet Joe. The descripitons were beautiful and the love really shone through. This line "And our hearts aglow" does not rhyme and that threw me off a little. Also, I think you should add an extra line into the last stanza or make the last line rhyme with heart. It would flow easier that way. Keep up the excellent work though. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Very cleverly written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    So sweet n lovely poem...

    god bless u

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