Comments : My Enemy-My friend

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Hmm, I think it should go in friendship. Nice job on this, it was quite emotional. I found that the rhymes you used were a little simple though and that the poem could be improved with more detail. Keep up the godo work though 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I think this should be in friendship .
    Some rhymes just seemed too simple .
    And others seemed kind of forced in a way .
    The last stanza, try editing it a little .
    But overall, it was good .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY