If You Want This To Be

by Jenni Marie   Oct 30, 2006


If you want this to be
Our love will always last
If you want this to be
Our love wont become the past.

If you want this to be
To our love I'll always remain true
If you want this to be
I'll always stay with you.

If you want this to be
I'll always stand by you
If you want this to be
No matter what we do.

If you want this to be
I'll never leave
If you want this to be
In our love you must believe.

For I believe in you
I hope you'll stay true
Every day we're together
Our love still feels new.

I know we don't agree
On a lot of things
But I truly believe
To me, you God did bring.

I know we can both be stubborn
I know a lot of the time we clash
But I'll never leave your side
To do so would be drastic and rash.

I know we drive each other crazy
A whole lot of the time
But I sincerely hope
Your heart will always be mine.

We rarely agree on anything
Except for our love
I believe you are my Angel
Sent for me from above.

I know that this can last
Together we can be free
As long as this is what
You keep wanting it to be.

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  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww it's adorable. ^_^ Many people think that they're 'love' is from Heaven. I just thought that part was al little cliche and I was expecting it to be that he was from Heaven.

    Rhymes, again were easy and cliche. A lot of them had one syllables. Try finding rhymes that people usually don't use, and your poetry will improve very quickly.

    The repetition was used a little bit too frequently. I thought you could probably cut out some of them and replace them with your emotions. Emotions are a key thing in poems. You had some in here, but you could go deeper with the meaning. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by xXSomeoneLoveMeXx

    Nice job..keep writting and have fun! please comment and rate my poems..thanks

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