Nice job..keep writting and have fun! please comment and rate my poems..thanks

Aww it's adorable. ^_^ Many people think that they're 'love' is from Heaven. I just thought that part was al little cliche and I was expecting it to be that he was from Heaven.

Rhymes, again were easy and cliche. A lot of them had one syllables. Try finding rhymes that people usually don't use, and your poetry will improve very quickly.

The repetition was used a little bit too frequently. I thought you could probably cut out some of them and replace them with your emotions. Emotions are a key thing in poems. You had some in here, but you could go deeper with the meaning. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha