by Jessica Oct 30, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Running the sharp blade across her wrist |
I love that |
This poem is amazing, it's so vivid etc. Cant wait to read another one. Well done. |
I really loved that.. the dark imagery is so powerful! you paint such a vivid picture! xx |
by DevilWithin
Wow that was really good i feel the pain in that heart....good poem...rachy |
When the white wings sprout does that symbolize her going to heaven? And then when they soak up the black paint, does it symbolize that heaven absorbs the pain? I loved this poem but what exactly did you want it to mean? Plz tell me, I'd love to know! Definitaly 5/5 though! Keep up the Great work! |