Shilohs Sonnet

by Hope Bound Heart   Oct 30, 2006


Beautiful and blond
Shes so cunning and sweet
She picks my day up
Lifts me off my feet

She never lets me down
She knows how to treat me right
she always loves me gently
and hugs me really tight

Shes the one who makes me feel
Like the world is a better place
She can light up the darkest room
and bring a smile to my face

She always knows what to say
She makes me feel at home
She accompanies me
Even when I'm alone

Is this the reason I love her
This is not true
the reason I love this girl
Is because I just truly do

Its not the way she dresses
or the way she looks at me
Its the way she makes me feel
She sets my heart free

Its the way she says nothing
And all my cares go astray
Its the way she tucks me in
and I dream the night away

I feel so real around her
We can always be ourselves
She makes me feel so good inside
Every thing's always well

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Aw this is a very touching peice..i could feel your emotions that you were portraying, and can relate to this with my boyfriend, you are very talented and your girlfriend is very lucky. the only think that i will mention but i may be wrong is.. in the last stanza you wrote ' real so around her'.. was it meant to be 'so reall around her'? other than that great write..5/5
    Best wishes
    Please could you read and comment on my poems, i'd like to know what you think, and how i can improve. thanks xx kirsty xx

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