Aw this is a very touching peice..i could feel your emotions that you were portraying, and can relate to this with my boyfriend, you are very talented and your girlfriend is very lucky. the only think that i will mention but i may be wrong is.. in the last stanza you wrote ' real so around her'.. was it meant to be 'so reall around her'? other than that great write..5/5
Best wishes
Please could you read and comment on my poems, i'd like to know what you think, and how i can improve. thanks xx kirsty xx