Just Listen

by Sexy N Sweet   Oct 30, 2006


Just Listen

My narrow halls are dark,
My walls are gray and gloomy.
You promised me the world,
But you delivered nothing.

I ask you for help,
Turning your head you dont see the heartache.
I ask you for love,
You turn your back, as if you never loved at all.

I am lost in my emotions,
So I build a wall.
You get mad and very frustrated,
So you ask why?

I express my reasons,
Your beautiful blue eyes full of confusion.
Now you know about my reasons,
Its all because
YOU WOULDN'T LISTEN

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  • 17 years ago

    by SWEET PEA 318

    Yayaya i know directed to the blck guy huh... lol just playin so what up girl i miss u

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great write nice flow , feel the emotions in it and the pain, know the feeling, keep up the good work.
    your friend Tracy ~~5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    Wow .. its rele great ... i rele liked the way uve expressed ur self ... keep it up ...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    I really like this, It is full of emotion. I love the last stanza. 5/5 Awesome!

  • 18 years ago

    by jamie lynn

    Hey i like it it's really good and i get what your trying to say in your poem keep it up its good

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