Your Innocence Shattered Last

by Hannah Emellia   Oct 30, 2006


Your beautiful luster faded away,
Your shimmering eyes; are they gone to stay?
Yesterday you cried,
You're always gone inside,

I think you're stuck inside yourself,
In your hardened shell,
I think you're wasting away inside,
In your private hell,

Smiling wont cover up your pain,
Shattered glass reflects your soul,
Shining tears falling like rain,
Simply no way to make you whole,

Lost in your sadness you failed to see,
Losing you- what it did to me,
Laughter is in the past,
Lost to you at last...

Y- Your
I- Innocence
S- Shattered
L- Last

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    Nice format, I don't think it was completely necessary to put the YISL before the final line, but I guess some people wouldn't've gotten it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    I like the way you've written this poem - never seen this form before! I also like the way you describe things. My favourite stanza was the second one. Very emotional write.
    Good job overall!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    An interesting way of writing it. Nice job and great piece. Some cool word play. The third stanza is my fave. Okay it is different and I think that it had an effective way of drawing people in. Love the scheme of how it's created. Cool work.
    ~Faith-less

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A neat poem and an interesting way to write your poem about YISL. Jpoet*

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