WOW that poem wow lol i related to that so so so so much!! i love it def 5/5! xx

So good.
I had to read it a couple of times because I thonght it was so nice.

Very Nice. Poem.... feeling realted with real love... :)

Yes! This poem was perfect! It's meaning was truthful, and I don't think you could change anything else. It's flawless! I love that feeling described in this poem. It makes me feel like I'm flying. I expecially love this stanza:

Can you hold my arm,
everywhere I go
Can you feel my breath,
on your shoulder when it's cold
Can you see me when it's dark
Can you please never let me go

I love this because it truly is beautiful! You use words very artistically and you give them a whole new meaning. Keep up the great work! Great job!

I really like this poem , it said everything that you want to say all at once, wonderfully written and choice of words was great , the flow was perfect , great write, loved this line,,,:
Do you always want to love me,
even when it's hard
Will we ever be together or just drift apart
Don't ever want you to leave me
Do you think it is too hard.,,,, great job my friend,,, your friend Tracy d,,,,,,5/5

OH itS a lovelY writinG...i prefeR mucH... thankS lol.....

luzaN

ItS a wonderfuL expressioN.... 5/5

luzaN

This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

Nazeer

Fantastic.. A true yearning for all that love encompasses to come at the hard times as well as the easy. Well done. xx

O my god, this is really an emotional poem. Touched my soul! Very well written Hebetje!