Wow, this is really well written, i can barely write like this! Oh yeah , nice profile! LOL! Its funny, the stick in the mud part anyways! : ) Thanx fo the comment!

That was a pretty cool poem, the end made me smile, i know how it feels to be up all night writing

"My minds wick is brightly burning
Silhouetted in darkness
With the clocks click-clock churning
It holds my eyes far too wide
Each blink reminiscent
Of drawn out impatient sighs..."

^A very powerful stanza, indeed. You pen this poem well, holding, essentially, the story of the poem (theme) under good control. Great use of alliteration and imagery, I think.
I understand how you're trying to present this poem, through shorter sentences etc; though I would suggest using the odd semi colon and colon to support the sentence structure a bit more.

Overall, a well written account. Well done :]

-Elysium.