by BehindThisSmilex Oct 31, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I have entered reality |
by Baby Rainbow
I like the structure of it and how you end it with the most important word. its really well written. take kare hunni x x x |
by aimee
I really like the way it captures attention, Your an Incrediable writer, and by the way thank you so much for commenting my poem! it really did mean allot to me, |
by XxTearDropxX
Good poem, i hate the real life too. i love to live in a fairytale. but my mom says life doesnt work like that but if it was up to me it would work like that.:) |