Good poem, i hate the real life too. i love to live in a fairytale. but my mom says life doesnt work like that but if it was up to me it would work like that.:)

*Jessica*

I really like the way it captures attention, Your an Incrediable writer, and by the way thank you so much for commenting my poem! it really did mean allot to me,
xx [[lots of love, Nat]]

I like the structure of it and how you end it with the most important word. its really well written. take kare hunni x x x