I can feel something really good coming from this, i just feel confused sometimes. Was the fourth line supposed to say war? Very good, but it just needs a little more articulation.

Open the eyes of the weak! Very nice! I like the cause! Scored it fair

I have written about this subject one to many times Alexis and completley agree with you...as long as your one who holds you faith in God, your one less person we have to worry about in the world and thats always a plus! Loved this write..short and right to the point!
Kristy and Chelsey
Krissey

Wow, this was an amazing poem. If everybody thought like you and saw the mistakes we're making as we change then we could fix things up and the world wouldnt be such a bad place. At the moment I think all we have is hope for change.
xxBonniexx