FAILURE

by sweetiepie18   Oct 31, 2006


From the beginning
All the time
In the quiet moments
Long before you ran
Underneath, not always on full show
Rules me for all time.
Everlasting, so why's it always mine?

isnt as straight forward as it first seems Failure is spelt down the side, you need to use failure to start each line.
its new to me let me know if you think its any good.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    An acrostic poem huh? I dont know if it suits your style I find them too constricting having to start with a definite letter sort of limits your poetic freedom. Its great, but I dont know...yeah I liked it!

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