Comments : Tainted

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    I like it! I love the structure of the first stanza and the repitition was excellent. Maybe add a little more to the second stanza...and yet dont.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Yes, you really should add, cause you have an amazing start,
    but from what you have, its great
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    It is short but it's nicely written...
    Josie