by *Charisma*
A very sweet poem with a happy feel to it! Jpoet* |
by Jessie
Okay let me tell you something...i wouldnt date this guy if i were you coz your young and sadly relationships never last long when your young and im learning that myself actually but anyhoo you dont want to be more than what you are now because then if something does happen there is no more friendship trust me on that no matter if he says you will always be friends it doesnt work like that...im in that situation right now so trust me on that, just love him with all you got but stay friends coz i really dont want you to end up like me even tho i dont know you...♥ |
I LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!! i say tell him if u really want but ur riskin ruining a friendship but u'll never kno otherwise!! keep writin'...i added u to my fav. list!! thanx for the comment and God bless! |
by Gem
"!Figuring you out is like a giant puzzle |
by Jen
Wow i loved this poem it has a happy feel about it even though you dont know what to do about it. |
by Ruthie
Hey there huny. that was a lovely write :) only thing i'd say is if ur going 2 rhyme try and keep it going the whole way through lol but other then that it twas awesomely done... |
by Misstress
I think its better to let love run its course, and friendship is a good foundation for it, but its up to you, Im sure he will know that you have feelings for him if you will lead him. |
Wow, wonderful write, great Job. I loved it. |
Loved the poem, was awesome....5/5 |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, i really love this poem, its like you are speeching my heart. |
by Anonymous
Wow, it's so cute! :] |
Did i ever tell u i love u jk but this is really good |
by Shae
Your poem is really good! I acually don't know what to say about it! hehe.. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Thats cool, and so perfect, |
by Bridgette
Aww... I absolutely adore this poem. I went through the same thing with one of my friends.. Although I finally figured out that I didn't like him as much as he liked me and it kind of scared me... lol. Anyways.. you did an amazing job on this poem. The flow and rhythm was practically flawless and I think that you did an amazing job expressing your emotions. I can tell that you really care about this person. Hope everything works out for the best! 5/5 Take Care :) |
by awww
That was a sweet poem... i almost felt like i was the one in love [or puppy love]... it made me smile to read your poem because i was like... aww look at her, so happy and smiles alot... especially when you capitalized the "ME", it gave more impact... most parts rhymed and some dont, but its ok.. i still like you poem.. 5/5 keep writing! |
by Sarah
Awe!!!! |
by AmY
Awesome poem. i cant give u any advices cuz im in the same situation and dunno what to do myself :((( |