by Donavin Oct 31, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
This Darkness |
It's short and well good. There's the annoying thing with having everything in caps but getting past that the rest of the piece is cool. Short with a lot contained in it. The last line simply stood out to me. There was something about it that well...I guess tied in to the rest. |
by Victoria
Nice poem like it |