I think that poem is really unique. Inspiration has to come from somewhere, even from another rhyme like that. I think you did a great job of writing this. A good story written behind it all. Keep it up. =]

Tammie

Wow all your poems are soo good and so cleaver i wish i was a good wrighter like u.... love them all xoxox
georgia

Dam that was a good poem i loved it

OMG You are a very good poet and thanks for commenting my poem I just thought i'd return the favor. Not just because you commented mine but because you are a good poet! lol So anyways keep up the good work and I give you a 5 too!