How beautiful! Congrats on winning first place and thanks for commenting on my poem! *10/5* if I could!
Ciao...*

Congrats! great job in this one!

Girl, theres a REASON it was first place! it was adorable!! i loved the story to it...i love story poems. oh, and to let you know, you were really close in the contest i judged, just some things attracted me to the other poems a bit more. but your poem had extremely good imagery, so good job!