The House Of Doom [Double Tetractys]

Wow, that was really good. It all fit together nicely. The conclusion was perfect!

One of the hard style of poetry to deal with yet, you have done a brilliant job, exellent work.

Never have I attempted to write in this form, you have done a great job with it,
it flowed well.

God Bless!

Awh, wow sweetie that was good! I loved how it flowed freely even though their were syllable counts. The emotion was clear and the words you used effective. Very nicely done! 5/5

A very sad double tetractys, You did an excellent job on this Hun.. I always find these really difficult to write, but You have made it look so easy.. Well done 5/5 xx

P.S I'm doing ok thanks :] xx