Wow, this was really sad Tammie. Very nicely done though, in such few words you expressed so much in such a intense way. ;P I loved it.

I do have one minor suggestion though... You probably couldn't change it, cause of the style it's written in. But with this line: "I ever did to deserve all of this" ..Using the term "this" can sometimes leave the reader confused and unaware of what the character in the poem has or went through. So yesh. Just try to explain a little more in detail. ;P Still a great poem though. I can relate alot. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Wow, really good! Excellent Tammie, you have done it again:)

A very sad double tetractys, You did an excellent job on this Hun.. I always find these really difficult to write, but You have made it look so easy.. Well done 5/5 xx

P.S I'm doing ok thanks :] xx

Awh, wow sweetie that was good! I loved how it flowed freely even though their were syllable counts. The emotion was clear and the words you used effective. Very nicely done! 5/5

Never have I attempted to write in this form, you have done a great job with it,
it flowed well.

God Bless!

One of the hard style of poetry to deal with yet, you have done a brilliant job, exellent work.

Wow, that was really good. It all fit together nicely. The conclusion was perfect!