by Natalie Oct 31, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Vibrant colors gleaming into dull eyes, |
by shellybaby
I loved it, the meaning that i got is that its a metaphor for a person who is tired, someone who tries so hard but is reaching the end of their strengths |
by Rebecca
That is so beautiful.....And i think i've found the deeper meaning.... |
by kori
Wow, for some reason i can really relate to this poem. well-written and great vocabulary. |
by dora
Hey darl a powerful poem xx |
by Ali
Well a guy i knew recently killed himself and this poem really reminded me of the lost feelings of no hope that compel people to go there, i think it's well written and very provocative! |