Aww, that was sweet.

Watch out for spelling and grammar mistakes though.

Always capitalize your 'I's, and when you're writing "id" it should be "I'd". Also watch out for missing out the last letter off words, I noticed you did that.

Anyhow, it was sweet and an enjoyable read.

Wonderful poem. I think that it has a great flow to it. Keep up the great work

Awwww this is so sweet!...whoever you wrote this for is lucky to have someone like you ... great job! 5/5

~michelle~