by Jessica Oct 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Black mascara runs across soft cheeks |
by Emma Brown
Your words are so effective, it touched me deeply. I really related to this as I've been there done that etc ... I loved this piece. It was beautifully written and wonderfully worded. 5/5. |
Wow...that was amazing :D |
by Deana
I really related to this ,I guess I`ve been there done that. the rhymes were smooth ,very good read. |
by J-s
I like your poem it is original and not what i expected. |
by jessica
I loved it and i know every girl is that way 1 time in her life... GOOD JOB!! |