WOW!
This was excellent.
I loved everything about it.
The wording, flow and imagery was great and I found this to be really sweet yet sad.
5/5

Wow, this is beautiful. Your words are so effective, it touched me deeply. I could identify with this piece like no other. Put together very well, Keep up the wonderful work. God bless.

An amazing poem, i love everything about it. I can relate to this so much, so it touches my heart alot. I unfortunately haven't quite erased his love though, i'm close to it! I love this poem. Excellent work, yet again. =] Keep it up! 5/5 Definately!

Tammie xo

Omg, this poem was excellent... i think alot of people including myself can relate to it... the way u communicated ur words was just superb... keep up the work

Wow, just wow, you are a very talented writer. Your words and the way you use them is awesome. The flow and the structure was good. I would deffinetly like to see more from you, I was just getting into this then it stoped, maybe make your poems a little longer. Awesome Job all the way through.

Ciao, Joe

A very sad love poem to read. Loved your vocabulary choices in this one, it made the emotions seem stronger to me. Loved this one. You're a great writer. 5/5

Stephanie

Very sad... amazingly written! I FELT this one! So much emotion and great word choice. Also, fantastic flow + I love the first line: good imagery!!!

xxEvilAngelxx

As in it was the most awesome poem I ever read...I like it lot you really did it perfectly jiving every words, rhyme flows smoothly and most especially the feelings are shown well in each line it was so sad.WOW!!! KEEP THE GOOD WORK

Wow, wonderful work.
Eloquent, and touching.
A very nice piece.

Best Wishes,
Luna

5/5

Soo sad!!!! I really like this poem. You make a poem that is totally unoriginal become totally original with use of imagery and words (an okay, so blonde hair is really hot so that spiced up the poem) and so keep up the good work. 5/5 BTW: Great use of vocabulary!

Wow, this is another great poem that i was really speechless reading......5/5

I loved it and i know every girl is that way 1 time in her life... GOOD JOB!!

I like your poem it is original and not what i expected.

I really related to this ,I guess I`ve been there done that. the rhymes were smooth ,very good read.

Wow...that was amazing :D

Your words are so effective, it touched me deeply. I really related to this as I've been there done that etc ... I loved this piece. It was beautifully written and wonderfully worded. 5/5.
Much love, Emma xox