Car Crash

by Jochsey   Oct 31, 2006


I arrive on scene
In the big red truck
When we got the call
I knew it was gonna suck

It was a high speed crash
Just out of town
A small old car
Which the colour was brown

I walk to the car
But soon start to run
For I had just realized
That it was my son

I get to the door
And see you trapped inside
I feel so helpless
I can only look from the side

It starts to rain
As I try to stand
I know that there is nothing
as I hold my sons hand

Yours eyes start to close
and your grip weakens
It is so dark, Except for
the glow from the beacons

I watched you die
On the side of the road
Trapped in a tin can
Ready to explode

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Dark is not my favorite genre but you have done a good job once again!

  • 17 years ago

    by bethany

    Fabulous poem! excellent work! im glad to have you on my favorites! :) ! thanx for the comment on mine, by the way! â—‹â—‹BethanyBridgesâ—‹â—‹

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    A wonderful poem andrew. i would like to see more poems by you. maybe a new one bout someone special to you. you know wat i mean.

    5/5 David

  • 18 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    Rele well written .. liked it...keep it up