Nicely Wrote Brings A Tear To My Eye

You did an amazing job and your not the only one who wants this fighting to go away. Again, great job!
-laura-

So many people are considered selfish and shallow
Because they wish for money and pain
I'm considered unrealistic
because I wish to end suffering and pain.

THIS IS A GREAT POEM I GAVE IT A 5/5 JUST CHANGE THE FIRST PAIN TO FAME I THINK THATS WHAT YOU MEANT PLEASE DONT BE OFFENDED FOR THE CORRECTION AND THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS......

A very true life poem you have written here. Most people do just want peace but in this world it is so hard to find with all the bad things that happen too. Great write! 5/5 Keep it up, hun!

Stephanie

People taking drugs
and destroying their life's .

Life`s shuld be lives .
But yeah, anywaays .
This poem is very true of life .
Yu did an ah`mazing job with this one .
Very nicely written .
..ღ__MiNDYY

Yes, the world is a messed up place, but try to look at all the good things. That's what I do. We cannot change the evil, and we cannot have the world as a perfect place, we can try, but we know it will never happen. All of these problems are man-made, and only if we stand together can we defeat it, but we will never learn to stand together. There will always be evil in this world.
But it's wonderful to think of a world where there was none of those things..
Nice poem..

Amazing,i really like this poem,its very realistic which makes it more enjoyable.
btw i read other poems u wrote too and i think ur really a true poet.. :P
here is my email if u want id like to chat if u want and share some ideas if thats okay with u.
raya_21@hotmail.com
thanx.

This is a terrible world and only getting worse by the day. I wish many things that wont happen also this is wy they are wishes nice job 5/5

These few words say it all ... i dont need to say more