Let Death Take You.

Wow thats so strong, and so goood x x x x

This was a really nice poem. i would change these two lines though, change the second let. i think the repition of let should be there. or maybe you just need some rewording.

Let the crimson blood flow
And let the darkness overtake you.

The poem was great it really touched me b/c i've tought about this before so anyway it's good to see poems about this out there

Wow, graphic and very powerful!

After reading the other poem, i expected more or less of the same. I knew this poem would be sad by the title, but i never guessed i'd have been overwhelmed by the powerfulness and words. well done
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